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Mass Destruction V1 by ~Bazza-:iconBazza-:

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Submitted: February 16, 2004
Image Size: 439 KB
Resolution: 1047×1344
Comments: 12
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Been workin on this in PhotoShop for bout 3hours now and still got a bit to do on this one (most noteably the right hand side of the star field) but im starting to get bored and this is my first ever time at creating a planet and blowing it up (thanks UCD) so here is version1 for now :)

I need as many comments on how to improve upon this as i can get, cuz as i said its my 1st attempt and we all learn by making mistakes :p

Also thats my fist ever 'Tech Ring' so lemme know if ya hate it :)
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~mwolf:iconmwolf: Feb 16, 2004, 7:00:30 PM
I think it's a good start, but I can see a few areas to work on.
- I don't see much impact of the blast on the planet, maybe there could be some debris flying up?
- the light beam doesn't look straight (although that may be my eyesight)
- the ring seems two-dimensional; in fact if there's a way to give the whole picture a greater feeling of depth, I think that would help. Of course I have no idea how you can accomplish this, since I'm completely lacking in any artistic talent myself. :-)
Overall, like I said, it's a very good beginning. I'm looking forward to the nexr version.
~mwolf:iconmwolf: Feb 16, 2004, 7:00:40 PM
I think it's a good start, but I can see a few areas to work on.
- I don't see much impact of the blast on the planet, maybe there could be some debris flying up?
- the light beam doesn't look straight (although that may be my eyesight)
- the ring seems two-dimensional; in fact if there's a way to give the whole picture a greater feeling of depth, I think that would help. Of course I have no idea how you can accomplish this, since I'm completely lacking in any artistic talent myself. :-)
Overall, like I said, it's a very good beginning. I'm looking forward to the next version.
~mwolf:iconmwolf: Feb 16, 2004, 7:10:10 PM
Sorry for the double post. Of course, adding one more isn't really helping, is it? :)
*xgod-0:iconxgod-0: Feb 16, 2004, 7:20:32 PM
tech ring is mad, but i kinda looks funny coming from no where. Also that beams man kicks ass. awesom job

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~internethead:iconinternethead: Feb 17, 2004, 3:23:12 AM
wicked beam Bazza, but u cud have sum debris from the planet, maybe a colour change and sum sparks at the end of the beam? teach rings ok, but its too 2D for that image i think. nice work though!!!
~Bazza-:iconBazza-: Feb 17, 2004, 4:56:06 AM
lol, no problem man thxz for your comments - ill see what i can do to add depth :)
~Bazza-:iconBazza-: Feb 17, 2004, 4:57:11 AM
thxz for the comment man, a colour change that could work very well thxz for the idea m8 :)
*xgod-0:iconxgod-0: Feb 17, 2004, 5:50:43 AM
no worries dude

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